So i updated my pic per the comments I already recieved. I missed that her face was blown. Does this work better? Thanks for the CC and looking.

So i updated my pic per the comments I already recieved. I missed that her face was blown. Does this work better? Thanks for the CC and looking.

So I thought I would let dd go outside and play and she was really excited. There were patches of snow throught the yard and she had to run through each little patch. Then she decided she would make snowballs to throw. That was lots of fun until ...........
She realized it was really cold on her hands. And since I am such a great Mom of course I had to take this picture before I put the camera away and took her inside to get her hands warm. I used to try and crop in frame but there was a post on two peas that talks about crop in PS so that's what I did. Thanks for all the comments from the last post. It really helps motivate me to get out and take more pictures when I read what you have to say. Thank you.
And for the extra. I have been working on this for a while and I think I finally got it. CC would be greatly appreciated as I want to print this as a 10x20 and put in dd's room. I know it's not perfect but it's the best so far. For some reason the exposure on these isn't the same despite the fact that everything else was the same. So the coloring is a little off from each picture. Still have to work on that for the futur. My ? is do you think it's good enough to print?
Ok so these pics weren't taken today but oh well. I took dd to the Zoo on friday. We had great weather and couldn't pass it up. We had so much fun, however it was hard chasing a 2yr old and taking her picture at the same time. I thought I would do a vintage feel to these and try the rounded corners. I really like the feel to them. The only zoom lense I have is the Sigma 28-105mm f2.8 and that's what I used. I really don't like this lense as my images aren't as sharp as they are when I use my 50mm f/1.8. So I will need to get a better zoom lense but that will have to wait a while. CC is welcomed and encouraged and please don't be afraid to give me the hard stuff. I shot in raw for the first time and I think it's the way to go. I just don't care for the work flow as there are too many programs to process in. I will have to work on that. Thanks for all the CC and feedback. I really appreciate it.
ISO 400 f/4.0 SS 640 105 mm
ISO 400 F/2.8 SS 3200 28mm
ISO 400 F/4.0 SS 1/2000 105mm
Thought I would take some pics of dd and dh. Let me know if you think their faces are too washed out. I'm working with natural light. I know I need a reflector (working on that). I can redue the conversion though if you think the faces are too washed out. Thanks for the cc on these.
